小mani 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

這句英文有沒有錯??

這句英文有沒有錯??

Thank you for your kind attention and I will be appreciated if you would kindly give me a reference letter.

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    " I will be appreciated " should be corrected as"

    " IT WOULD be GREATLY appreciated " or "IT SHOULD be GREATLY appreciated"

    注意﹕" I will be appreciated " 即指 "你會被受欣賞" - 這是此句最大的錯處!

    用" would " / " should " 而不用 " will " 是客套的用法,也是慣常的用法!

    用 would 就不用 kindly,太累贅。

    全句可改成﹕

    " Thank you for your kind attention and it should be greatly appreciated if you would give me a reference letter" or

    " Thank you for your kind attention and it would be greatly appreciated if you could give me a reference letter "

    ps. " would " 同 " could " 同樣是客套用語

    2007-03-15 01:25:38 補充:

    typo: 注意﹕" I will be appreciated " 即指 " 你會被受欣賞 " - 這是此句最大的錯處!應改成注意﹕" I will be appreciated " 即指 " 我會被受欣賞 " - 這是此句最大的錯處!因此 " I " 必須改為 " It " - " It should be greatly appreciated " 意指「這樣會受到我的萬分讚賞」(被動式)

    2007-03-15 01:34:13 補充:

    信我, it should be appreciated 是慣常的用語,無人講 I should be appreciated o架!

  • 1 十年前

    這句英文有問題。

    Thank you for your kind attention and 沒有錯。

    I will be appreciated 有問題。這裡是被動形,指{我會被感激}。改成:

    I will appreciate我會被感激}

    if you would kindly give me a reference letter. 沒有大問題。但give可以寫成write。因為通常是先寫後給。請求用could,不應用would。

    Kind完又kindly也非常長氣。

    Thank you for your attention. I will appreciate if you could kindly write me a reference letter. 應是比較好的方法。

    不過如果你問我應點做,寫得reference letter,應該都係識你的人。我建議打電話或約見,口頭問可唔可以。然後先寄封多謝信,內加其他詳情。咁會有人情味一些。佢寫都寫得開心D。

    2007-03-14 20:30:04 補充:

    第四行 typo:I will appreciate {我會感激}

  • 1 十年前

    Thank you for your kind attention and I will be appreciated if you would kindly give me a reference letter.(你的)

    Thanks for your kind attention and I will be appreciated if you would kindly to give me a reference letter.(提議)

  • SK Pom
    Lv 5
    1 十年前

    I suggest you change it to:

    Thank you for your kind attention and I will appreciate if you would (or change would to could) kindly give me a reference letter.

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  • 1 十年前

    basically correct ga~~ give you 2 more examples ar~~

    Thank you for your kind attention and I will be much grateful if you would kindly give me a reference letter.

    or

    Thank you for your kind attention and it would be much appreciated if you would kindly give me a reference letter.

    資料來源: me^^
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    Lv 6
    1 十年前

    Thank you for your kind attention and I will be appreciated if you would kindly give me a reference letter.

    谢谢您亲切的关注,并且我被赞赏您是否亲切地会给我参考信件。

    Thanks your kind attention, and I am appreciated you whether can give me kindly to refer to the letter.

  • 1 十年前

    I would change this sentence to "Thank you for your attention and would be higher appreciated the reference letter."

  • 1 十年前

    沒有錯 沒有錯 沒有錯 沒有錯 沒有錯

    資料來源: no
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