ronin49 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

Neep help with this translation

Is there any lost in translation between the original

”水商売のお姉ちゃん達も(forename)って多いね”

and

”Even many young demimondaine in the colourful (nightlife) industry are called (forename)”?

If so, what would the new English transation be?

Thanks in advance!

更新:

WCCJEyakisoba,

a. Here ”colourful industry” can denote anything underground (or near-underground), and includes all aspects of nightlife business (nightclubs, bars, escort services, whoredom etc.); (see next addendum)

更新 2:

(continued)

b. ”Demimondaine” means whore, or to be more precise in this case, any young girl in the aforementioned fields on the verge of committing the dirtier business.

Also, I require the English translation to be a bit vague and not exactly to-the-point. (see next addendum)

更新 3:

(continued)

So, should the souped-up version be:

”Many young demimondaine operating in the colourful night-time business are called (forename)”?

Or, do you have newer suggestions rather than your original one, which sounds a bit too acute? Please advise!

更新 4:

Addendum:

Or maybe the translation should be,

”Those young demimondaine operating in the colourful night-time business are often called (forename)”?

Kindly advise!

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  • 炒麵
    Lv 7
    1 十年前
    最愛解答

    My understanding of the sentence 「水商売のお姉ちゃん達も(forename)って多いね」 is as follows: -

    Gals who runs a business of nightclub are often named (forename)

    「水商売」(みずしょうばい,Romaji: mi zu shou bai) in Japanese means an uncertain/chancy trade, or restaurant/bar/nightclub business nowadays, while 「水商売の女」(みずしょうばいのおんな,Romaji: mi zu shou bai no on na) means 〝bar girl〞or 〝prostitute〞in Japanese.

    Hope this will help!

    2007-03-09 23:40:18 補充:

    I think the term 「水商売」is quite a tricky one here in this sentence. According to Jap. Wikipedia, the definition of 「水商売」in Japanese is as follows: -

    2007-03-09 23:40:41 補充:

    Trade which depends mainly on uncertain or chancy conditions like customers' taste, popularity, business luck and appeal.

    2007-03-09 23:40:57 補充:

    In Japan, business which are considered as 「水商売」 includes entertainment showbiz like sumo, kabuki, gisha, dramas, restaurants which sells alcoholic liquors [including cafés, coffee house/bar, restaurants, Japanese bars (i.e. izakaya), bars, nightclubs] and whorehouses.

    2007-03-09 23:54:47 補充:

    Nowadays, however, an ambiguous meaning as "Trade related to restaurants (which alcoholic liquors are served) or all kinds of nightlife business" is defined.

    2007-03-09 23:55:13 補充:

    So I think simply translate the word 「水商売」as "colourful industry" and the phase「水商売の姉ちゃん達」as "demimondaines" may not be appropriate since these terms only related to nightlife business, and doesn't contain the other meaning of 「水商売」- Restaurant business!

    2007-03-10 00:03:37 補充:

    單單一句「水商売のお姉ちゃん達も(forename)って多いね」,在下實難從中推斷此句所指的女人,到底是經営飲食業還是色情事業,所以如果有前言後語的話,在下對上述翻譯會比較肯定一點。閣下如能就此提供進一步資料,在下感激不盡!歡迎其他網友也指點指點,謝謝!

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  • 1 十年前

    Very impressive, what more can I say?

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