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How to harmony with the elders’ need, such as regulating the room temperature in the four seasons, in order to ensure they are healthy?

A.4 Unfortunately, now we didn’t have air conditioners. But if you say, to ensure they are healthy, we have a way. We monitor the elders’ blood pressure closely; the doctors and nurses come here on a regular time schedule. Soon before the coming summer, air conditioners would be installed. As in summer, the elders perspire, many problems are produced.

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  • 1 十年前
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    As I understand what the older people need is very different from the younger people, how to strike a balance between personal needs & theirs? Such as adjusting the room temperature as the season changes? How to keep the room temperature suitable for them, and yet, not affecting our daily life?

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    (I’m responsible for the answer, I’m just trying to fix the grammar)

    Unfortunately, we do not have any air conditioner at this moment. However, besides adjusting the room temperature; what we do here to ensure their health condition is to have regular check up on their blood pressure by doctors & nurses who visit us on a regular basis.

    Air-conditioners will be installed before this summer to avoid possible health problems that may cause by the hot weather.

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  • 1 十年前

    錯處比較多…rewrite一次吧。

    How to fulfil the elders' needs and ensure their health? One of the things we need to do is to regulate the room temperature in all seasons.

    For the time being we do not have air conditioners. However, we monitor the elders' blood pressure closely. Doctors and nurses come here on a regular basis. We try our best to maintain a comfortable environment for the elders. We understand that more health problems may arise in the hot and wet summer, therefore we will also have air conditioners installed before the coming summer.

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