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Once upon a time there is a beautiful and clever girl called Cinderella. She lived with her stepmother and her three lazy stepsisters in an enormous house.Her stepsisters hated Cinderella.They treated her like a servant and made her to do all of housework.

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The prince who ruled the land wanted to married but could not find a sutied bride. He decided to hold a huge party and invited everyone to come.When Cinderella hears about the party,she was very sad because she did not have beautiful dress or proper shoes to put them on.

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Her cruel sisters had bought expensive new clothes for the party and laughed at when they saw poor Cinderella crying, dressing in her plain,dirty rags .

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But,soon after the sisters had leaving for the party,a fairy suddenly flew into the room and said."Cinderella, I'll grant you three wishes. You can have anything what you like."

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First,Cinderella asked the fairy change her rags into a long white silk dress. After this, the fairy waved her magic wand and a dazzling pair of glass shoes was appeared. Finally, Cinderella asked the fairy how she could got to the palace.

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With another wave of her magic wand the fairy turned a pumpkin into a carriage.

"Be careful, though," warned the fairy. "at midnight, all these things will be change back into what they were before . So don't come home lately!"

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Once upon a time there is a beautiful and clever girl called Cinderella. --- there was

They treated her like a servant and made her to do all of housework. --- all of the housework

The prince who ruled the land wanted to married but could not find a sutied bride. --- wanted to marry --- a suited bride

He decided to hold a huge party and invited everyone to come. --- and invite

When Cinderella hears about the party --- heard about the party

she did not have beautiful dress or proper shoes to put them on. -- to put on

Her cruel sisters had bought expensive new clothes for the party and laughed at when they saw poor Cinderella crying, dressing in her plain,dirty rags . --- and laugh when

But,soon after the sisters had leaving for the party,a fairy suddenly flew into the room and said --- had left for

You can have anything what you like." -- anything you like

First,Cinderella asked the fairy change her rags into a long white silk dress. ---fairy to change

After this, the fairy waved her magic wand and a dazzling pair of glass shoes was appeared. --- shoes appeared

Finally, Cinderella asked the fairy how she could got to the palace. --- could get

"Be careful, though," warned the fairy. "at midnight, all these things will be change back into what they were before . --- will change

So don't come home lately!" -- come home late