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匿名 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

Who should take the seat ?

A lot of people were standing at the bus station , waiting for the bus .

It was so cold that everyone wanted to have a seat on the bus .

All of people had been waiting for a long time ,

but the bus still didn' t come .

There was an old woman aged of seventy-five and a child aged of three among the

waiting people .

At last , No . 1 bus was coming to them ,

and then the old woman and the child got on the bus .

更新:

A kind man let them take his seat , but there was the only seat taken by them here .

Who should take the seat between the old woman and the three-year child ?

Some of people on the bus said that the old woman should take the seat ,

but the others said that the child should take it .

更新 2:

They had an argument with one another .The old woman and the child were bored because all of people on the bus were very noisy .

The bus arrived at the next station when they were still arguing .

The old woman and the child called loudly together ,

" Stop making that noise ! "

更新 3:

The old woman and the child got off the bus because they arrived at where they wanted to go .

At last , they didn' t take the seat on the bus .

請問以上有冇GRAMMAR寫錯呢?

可以再好D應該點改?

若要求唔高,低程度O黎睇,

你O地俾幾多分呀?10分滿分計.

更新 4:

In this case , who will you let to take the seat ?

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  • 1 十年前
    最愛解答

    ::maybe i roughly give some changesin order to keep your original meaning~::

    A lot of people were standing at the bus station , waiting for the bus .

    It was so cold that everyone wanted to have a seat on the bus .

    (::actually i cant see the relationship between cold weather and hav a seat, maybe u can consider a bit on it, but the grammar is fine here::)

    All of people had been waiting for a long time ,

    (All the people HAVE been waiting for a long time )

    but the bus still didn' t come .

    (but the bus still didn't arrive)

    There was an old woman aged of seventy-five and a child aged of three among the

    waiting people .

    (There was a SEVENTY-FIVE-YEAR-OLD woman and A LITTLE CHILD AGED THREE among the queuing people)

    At last , No . 1 bus was coming to them ,

    and then the old woman and the child got on the bus .

    (At last , BUS NO.1 arrived ,

    then the old woman and the child got ONTO the bus)

    A kind man let them take his seat , but there was the only seat taken by them here .

    (A kind man kindly let them take his seat, but there was only one seat)

    Who should take the seat between the old woman and the three-year child ?

    (Should the old woman or the three-year-old child take the seat?)

    Some of people on the bus said that the old woman should take the seat ,

    but the others said that the child should take it

    (Some people there said that the old woman should HAVE the seat, but some others argued that the child should take that)

    They had an argument with one another .The old woman and the child were bored because all of people on the bus were very noisy .

    (They have eventaully started up an arguement. The old woman and the child were bored due to the noise made by the arguing crowd. )

    The bus arrived at the next station when they were still arguing .

    The old woman and the child called loudly together ,

    " Stop making that noise ! "

    (The old woman and the child SHOUTED loudly,

    " SHUT UP ! " )

    The old woman and the child got off the bus because they arrived at where they wanted to go .

    (the old woman and the child got off the bus when they have arrived their destination.)

    At last , they didn' t take the seat on the bus

    (At the end, they both didnt take a seat from the bus.)

    :: I personlly think tht your passage gain 6.5 out of 10::

    :: hope the changin can help u ::

    資料來源: NR ninja
  • 1 十年前

    6/10, all OF the people,

    there was an ola woman who WAS aged...,

    At last, the number has CAME.

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