Ng 車厘 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年 前

我想問這句文化對嗎?如要修改應怎樣?thanks~

i have describe three major elements of logistic that include transportation , inventory , warehousing .

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  • 1 十年 前
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    首先要指出標題內的是文法而不是文化.

    在指出那裡有否錯及如何攺之前, 想問一些問題.

    1. 你是否剛完成那description? 若是, 你便可以用現在完成式的 have described. 即是你剛剛做完那些事情.

    2. Logistic 的 elements 是否不只三個? 如不是, 即是只有三個, 你便應在 three major elements 之前加上 the.

    其實你那句有沒有錯很在乎 where, when and whom you were talking to. May be you should express your meaning in Chinese with English for others to correct it if required.

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  • 1 十年 前

    我想有小小改动:-

    I have described those three major elements of logistics which include Transportation, Inventory and warehousing.

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