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高人改grammar - 10分

- I would like to ask our senior engineer - Mr. Yang, to go over the details of (the???) EBP. 有請Mr. Yang!

- I am afraid I (will/need to???) look into that point, and respond to your comment a little later.

- I'll go (and get/to get/getting???) someone who can explain it in more detail.

- We give a lot of concern (to???) the workers' welfare.

- What a joy (it???) is to have friends coming from afar.

note: 唔好為yahoo分數亂改please

更新:

- One three-and-a-half inch floppy disk can hold the contents of (these???) 12 encyclopedia volumes.

更新 2:

- Although we have received quite a few requests from customers and dealers to make a (wider-screen/wider-screened???) and lighter EBP, we (find/found???) that, with the old model's small screen, the amount of information which appeared at one time was insufficient.

更新 3:

有請Mr. Yang!

更新 4:

有請Mr. Yang! <- also transate to English

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  • 1 十年前
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    1. I would like to ask our senior engineer - Mr. Yang, to go over the details of the EBP. Please welcome Mr. Yang. (如果您需要观众鼓掌的话)

    I&#39;ll pass / hand it over to Mr. Yang. (如果您不需要观众鼓掌的话)

    2. 没问题!!

    I am afraid I would need to look into that point, and respond to your comment a little later.

    3. I&#39;ll go (get / to get / and get都是对的) someone who can explain it in more detail.

    但我会用

    I&#39;ll introduce you to someone who can explain it to you thoroughly.

    4. 没问题!!

    We give a lot of concern to the workers&#39; welfare.

    5. 没问题!!

    What a joy it is to have friends coming from afar.

    6. One three-and-a-half inches (复数) floppy disk can hold the contents of (these;在您拿着 / 指着 12本 encyclopedia volumes 的情况下才可以用 these) 12 encyclopedia volumes.

    7. Although we have received quite a few requests from customers and dealers to make a wider-screen (是对的,因为它是名词;而wider-screened是形容词,后面一定得加名词) and lighter EBP, we find(OR we have found比较好;因为您一直在用 have / has 的现在式) that, with the old model&#39;s small screen (with the small screen of the old model 会比较通顺), the amount of information which appears(现在式) at any(不懂解释;但我们都加的) one time is(现在式) insufficient.

    2007-01-15 10:01:59 補充:

    7. Although 只可以在 [虽然] 的情况下才可以用的。既然您的customers 已经request 了 widescreen 的时候, 您就不能用 although 了!

    2007-01-15 10:02:31 補充:

    We have already received quite a few requests from customers and dealers in providing a wider screen (不用 - 即dash;因为 wider 是形容词) and a lighter EBP.

    2007-01-15 10:02:52 補充:

    Our review of the old model has affirmed / confirmed such shortcomings, since the amount of information which could appear at any one time is insufficient.

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  • 1 十年前

    I would like to ask our senior engineer - Mr. Yang, to go over the details of THE EBP. 有請Mr. Yang!

    I am afraid I WILL HAVE TO/NEED TO look into that point, and respond to your comment a little later.

    I&#39;ll go GET/AND GET someone who can explain it in more detail.

    We give a lot of concern TO the (you can use OUR here - gives a sense of possession) workers&#39; welfare.

    What a joy IT is to have friends coming from afar.

    One three-and-a-half-inch floppy disk can hold the contents of (you need to put nothing here) 12 encyclopedia volumes.

    Although we have received quite a few requests from customers and dealers to make a WIDER-SCREENED and lighter EBP, we FIND/HAVE FOUND that, with the old model&#39;s small screen, the amount of information which appeared at one time was insufficient.

    2007-01-15 03:05:38 補充:

    有請Mr. Yang! - Just say &quot;Mr Yang&quot; or give him a nod. You can do anything to give Mr Yang a signal to say that it&#39;s his turn to speak.

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  • 1 十年前

    - I would like to ask our senior engineer - Mr. Yang, to go over the details of the EBP. 有請Mr. Yang!

    - I am afraid I need to look into that point, and respond to your comment a little later.

    - I&#39;ll go to get someone who can explain it in more detail.

    - We give a lot of concern to the workers&#39; welfare.

    - What a joy it is to have friends coming from afar.

    - One three-and-a-half inch floppy disk can hold the contents of these 12 encyclopedia volumes. - Although we have received quite a few requests from customers and dealers to make a wider-screened lighter EBP, we found that, with the old model&#39;s small screen, the amount of information which appeared at one time was insufficient.

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