dfg g 發問於 社會及文化語言 · 1 十年前

有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

The second methodology of data collection is survey research from internet searches, direct contact with Fairmont properties in Birth Columbian, and responses to questionnaires which necessitates programming survey method. Those suggested methodology may be used successfully for Discussion includes consequence for the expand plan of future plan in the Fairmont Hotels & Resorts.

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  • VAC
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    1 十年前
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    The second methodology of data collection involves conducting survey research in the internet, visiting the Fairmont properties in Birth Columbian, and obtaining the replies to questionnaires, that are all essential survey approaches. Those suggested methodology can be used for discussion on the impact of the expansion plan for Fairmont Hotels & Resorts in the future, with satisfactory result.

    * 我不是很明白 direct contact with Fairmont properties 這句,所以我改了用 visiting. 因為 properties 可以 visit,但我不明白怎樣可以 contact. 如你的意思是聯絡該地物業業主就請改這句為 contacting the property owner in Fairmont, Birth Columbian (不過我覺得interviewing 意思比較易理解)

  • 1 十年前

    The second methodology of data collection comprises survey research from search engines on the Internet, direct contact with the Fairmont properties in Birth Columbian, and response to questionnaires which necessitates programming survey method. Those suggested methodology may be used successfully for Discussion including consequences of the expansion strategy in the future plan of the Fairmont Hotels & Resorts.

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