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Many musician like to play piano. Also the opera of Italy and France is very popular too. The Italy opera wants to keep improving their songs, on the other hand it wants the orchestra to be brilliant.In the France, it’s a stern type of drama, from the start to the end of the performance is based on singing. I think the most interesting in this chapter is the opera of Romantic period. Because it is very difficult to perform with a lot of people and musician.
- 風Lv 61 十年前最愛解答
Many mistakes. My correction is as follows:
Many musician(s) like to play (the) piano. Also(,) the opera(s) of Italy and France (are) very popular too. The (Italian) opera (s)( want) to keep improving their songs, and (have a brilliant orchestra at the same time).In () France, (the opera is more formal/solemn), (based on singing from the beginning to the end). I think the most interesting (aspect) in this chapter is the opera(s) of (the) Romantic period (since) it is very difficult to perform with a lot of (singers) and musician(s).
Remember to use the plural form of the nouns and verbs. Always use " the " when you say " play the piano ". I ' ve rewritten some of your sentences to make them sound more natural.
- 1 十年前