捉錯處 4(不是功課,好野,高人請進)

The success in organising the International Festival of Inclusive Arts has been based on the enthusiastic support of all sectors of society. I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to all sponsors and supporting organisations. I anticipate that this partnership among different sectors will be further developed, and that the spirit of cooperation and inclusiveness shall spread out to every corner of the community.

from Internationl Festival of Inclusive Arts

更新:

這是官方文章,表面上好似好 OK,高人便會看出好多問題,不只是 GRAMMAR 咁簡單。如看不順眼,可成篇幫佢寫過。^_^

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    1 十年前
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    The success in organizing the International Festival of Inclusive Arts is based on the enthusiastic support from various sectors of our society. I would like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation to all the sponsors and supporting organizations. I expect that this partnership among different sectors will be further developed, and that the spirit of cooperation and inclusiveness shall spread out to every corner of the community.

    From International Festival of Inclusive Arts

  • 1 十年前

    高人ra~~

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