You betrayed her
What wrong word in below sentences?
Dear Mr Rose,
1. It was a pleasure to meet you the other day. I was very grateful
2. that you were able to find some times in your busy schedule to visit us.
3. I thought it should be helpful if I put on paper some of the points we
4. agreed on at our meeting and indicated some with the action points.
5. We agreed which my company will act as your agent in northern
6. Europe. As your agent, we will operate on a commission basis. We will
7. charge you on the rate of 20% for sales up to 2 million Euros. On sales above
8. such figure we will charge commission on a sliding scale up to a maximum
rate of 25%
Peter Find5 個解答語言7 年前
Two thieves walked around at the airport.
Thief A said , “We need to do something for our life”,
Thief B said, “What can we do?”
Thief A said: “ we just looked for someone who is rich. and we rob his belongings.
Thief B said: “How can you know somebody who is rich,
Thief A thought a while and said: “the person who has been nervous to hold on their luggage alone”,
Thief B said: that’s good thinking, we do this promptly,
After a while, Thief B said: “ The man who sit the chair alone and hold
on his bag., he is my target”,
Thief A said: “yet”,
Then two thieves walked to the man immediately but the man also walked against them too.
Two thieves thought astonishingly, “why the man is walking against us too?,
Thief B hesitated to said, “if the man is a police, we’ll arrest,
Thief A said: “wait a minute; A few peoples were standing up behind us. we may be arrested by them”,
The two thieves were shaking to raise up their hands and want to said: “we surrender at once”.
but the man and the behind of them of a few peoples was just a greeting each other.
Two thieves was happy that, they didn’t be arrested,
by the way, the two thieves didn’t do any bad thing after this event.
Would anybody mind correcting my writings? thankx2 個解答語言9 年前
Today I wake up at ten o’clock earlier than yesterday,
I switch on television and feed the dogs as usual,
如常, 開電視, 餵狗
Suddenly one dog of them, 囡囡 barks loudly towards the door and 東東 runs out faster from the small room at the same time.
突然, 其中一隻, 囡囡, 向住門口好大聲bark在,同一時間東東也好快地由細房走了出來.
I open door quietly and look over outside. Hey, just a cat is running through our doorway.
我輕聲地打開門跟著向外檢查一吓, hey, 原來一隻猫在問口走過.
I feel the floor so wet when I step back my home.
I remember that 東東 ran into a glass of water when outdoor was being made sound.
我記得了,, 當門口傳出聲音, 東東走出來時碰到一杯水.
I look for 東東 immediately. But 東東 already has slept like a baby on the bed.
At first, I want to blame him, but now I just touch his head.
I clean quickly round and prepare excellent food for me.
It is a special day, everyone has a different day or thing in their live like me,
This is a great example, It has the firstly and the end basically..
註: 東東和囡囡是一隻狗..5 個解答語言9 年前
Peoples like to go to disco draining their self large energy. 人們現在很喜歡去 disco 發洩他們的無窮精力.
Some day most peoples were dancing in XX Disco, suddenly most polices of casuals crowed into it when every body was playing happy 在某一天, 某某disco 有很多人正在跳舞, 突然間有很多便衣警察湧進內, 當大家好開心地玩樂.. The polices lined the peoples up against a wall, and said: “men stand at right side, women stand at left side, show your identity card quickly for us checking,” 警察把他們靠牆排成一直線, 跟著說: 男的站右邊, 女的站左邊, 快快拿出身份證出來給我們檢查.
Nowadays policemen check citizen’s identity card in service shop of the evening as quite regular. 在現時的社會警察到,在晚上開業的店鋪檢查身份證是很正常的事
唔該幫我看看有沒有錯..謝謝3 個解答語言9 年前
第一句 : 囡囡 brought a half piece of watermelon back home which it had been eaten. 囡囡帶了一片半拆被人食過的西瓜回家
I exclaimed in astonishment at her,
I took out her watermeon and said "Don't take anything back home from outside,
I know, you like watermelon much, ok, I'll buy some for you.
我明白的,,妳很喜歡食西瓜, ok, 我等陣買些回來比給妳.
囡囡 seemed to know when I ended my speech, she jumped up and down the sofa instanly.
註 : 囡囡是一隻狗..1 個解答語言9 年前