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     請幫忙看看英文文法有沒有錯!!?

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    1.cover letter所應該寫的要點是:指出求職者正面的特點適應職缺的需求與對公司的聊解.雖然可以引用求職者謙虛向上的態度,虛無的詞語卻是人云亦云,毫無建樹可言.只有反效果.

    2.5年之後,你看出XX事業沒有前途?到不如說你被YY事業的充滿希望與機會(一定要列出)所吸引.要是你不舉例列出一些機會,就會  過於虛幻.

    3.少用"I tried ..."而該用"I have done..."

    4.所以,我幫你改寫第一段如下:

    My below enclosed resume will show you that I have had diversified experiences in XX and YY areas, including five years of ZZZ responsibilities. Along these years, I also had the pleasure exploring AAA and found its tremendous potentials that Wall Street Journals claimed to have USD3B per year at 2025 in USA alone.  Therefore, I have determined to take on the change in switching to this career.  Nonetheless, I don't make the jump without preparation.

    In the past two years, I enrolled in five accounting classes and have obtained BBB certifications.  Also, I expect to finish CCC by the end of this year to complete my short term plan.

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